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 Being Sent
Authors Note: In this article I am talking about something that is close to my heart.I am working on my descriptive language in the piece. You could take this paragraph any way you want to but this is how I took it. I put a lot of effort into this piece,so I hope you enjoy it.

"Ships in harbor are safe , but that's not what ships are built for" says John Shedd. When I saw this quote on the computer I was inspired to write this piece. We (meaning people) are the ships.We are safe when we are following the crowd. No one can make fun of us because we're doing what everyone else is doing. But is that really what were made for, being the same as everyone else? Doesn't that sound boring to you? God doesn't want us to be the same. We were not built for that.People of this Earth are supposed to stand out of the crowd and be different. Sit with the kid who get picked on, do the sport that no one does. We need to stop caring about being safe and let God send us. Being sent is something that take courage because you will STAND OUT. 



Passion

Authors Note: This writing piece is all about my love for dance. I am trying to improve my word choice in this paragraph also. I put a lot of effort into this piece,so I hope you enjoy it
Passion means one word to me and this one word is dance.I can't go a day without keeping my mind off of it. Dance is like water me I can't live without. If you know me then you will know that I can't even go a couple minutes without standing up and "getting a groove on" as I call it. I didn't get this gift of dance on my own, though. I give all credit to God he is the one that has planted this love and passion right inside of me. So this is why whenever I am dancing I dance for him like he is the only person in the room.Wow what a love for something can do to you. So if you have a dream that you have always wanted to accomplish then just go for it. Your only getting older!!!

 Music
Authors note: In this paragraph I am talking about something that I believe is important in life. I am working on the topic of similes. I put a lot of effort into this piece,so I hope you enjoy it
Music is like fruit. You can’t just eat one type and think that you won’t like any of the others. You have to explore and learn the other kinds of fruit, and then you can see if you like them or not. Jazz is a very important genre of music. This is where you start, once you master the basics then you can go on and sing/play POP music.You have to respect all genres of music because they all will make you a better singer or band player. Being open up to different types of music, and having a positive outlook will even help you in the real world. Music can open up many doors of your life... so let it! 

Growing Up
Author's Note: In this article I am working on using all of the parts of speech correctly throughout my paragraph. It is all about growing up and what changes, and what doesn't change in your lifetime. I am using a very casual voice so that it is easier to follow.  I put a lot of effort into this piece, so I hope you enjoy it


Have you ever noticed that when you're growing up the littlest things will change? Like you start to make your own bed, having the responsibility of getting your first phone, and maybe even getting a date.Throughout our life, change is always here to challenge us. Somethings it will bring us down but most of the time it will bring us joy and new beginnings. You never know what kind of change will come up next. Even though there are so many unknown situations in life, you can be certain about one. Family is the stable foundation that you can trust in. They were the people to kiss you when you fell, and clean up your you-know-what when you had a accident. We have such a great source, family, so why is it that when we get older we think that we don't need their help anymore? Growing up can be a struggle but it is really it is all up to you and how you want to live your life.


Braces
Authors Note: Today I am getting braces and so I thought that it would be necessary to write about that topic. I am trying a new way of writing which is multiple paragraphs writing. It is the exact same thing but I will write more paragraphs. I put a lot of effort into this piece,so I hope you enjoy it.

People change their look all the time. Sometimes you have a chose but other times you won't. It is just like any other situation but it always pays off in the end.

Braces will hurt.That is a fact.Unless you're some "Macho Man" that can't even feel his arm when he gets one million shots.Through the pain and even the inconvenience it will always pay off in the end. It is just like becoming a follower of God. You will have to let go of the reins of your life and give it all to him. That will be a struggle and it will be unpleasant but it will pay off. With braces it will pay off with the fact that you'll have prefect teeth. Becoming a follower of God will forever change you because you will receive the gift of eternal life.

 Just like teeth though you can't stop brushing them once you get your braces off. You have to continue to put time and effort in to them. This is exactly what will have to happen when you become of follower of Jesus. You can't just forget about him once you have received what you wanted. You have to continue to put time and effort in to your relationship. So when it comes time to choose, what will you do? 


 The Moon
Authors Note: In this writing piece I let my ideas "flow out on paper" as I would call it. I did a informal writing piece about the moon. I put a lot of effort into this piece, so I hope you enjoy it.


When darkness comes into the night I notice something… the moon. So bright up there in the sky shimmering with glory. There is so much out there so much to explore and discover. The sky is endless to humans and it will never go away endless we let it.



 Our world is so worried about money and taxes. Why can't we be worried about nature in itself? Is our sinful nature taking over us? Things like money and taxes can lead us away from what is really important. Like are relationship with God, and even the time that is spent with are family and friends. Whatever is happening to our earth it has leading us to lose our grip of freedom and love of adventures. The littlest thing like getting rid of Space Launches can crush so many dreams. What about the kids that wanted to be an astronauts? Is that fair that those same kids will have to suffer in their choices, and in result have to make a new goal and dream in life. Will anyone every know? One thing you do know is this;
It only takes is a series of small situation to tear this world down. 

"The Glorious Whitewasher" 
Authors Note: I wrote this short summary because I wanted to reflect on my choosing of the Mode of Literature for the story " The Glorious Whitewasher". I am working on my frequency of writing each week so I decided to write this plus it was part of my LIT homework. I put a lot of effort into this piece, so I hope you enjoy it.

When I had to decide the mode of LIT for the short story  "The Glorious Whitewasher"  I believed that it was Romance. I think this because it's almost  like a fairy tale the way these kids act. The author described this picture perfect life in the beginning of the story and it ended in the same type of manor.  Everyone falls for Toms  pranks and in the ending Tom is rich and wealthy like a perfect boy! The point and reasoning someone would make a story like this is because; No one has a picture perfect life and no one will, but it makes us as humans happy to see this kind of life. It would be a lifting kind of read and the exact opposite of a Tragedy or Irony. These kinds of stories or books are the ones that keep us going in life and to give us hope and inspiration. 





 



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  2. Passion,

    I just read your passion pom and I don't think anyone could have said it better then you. I feel like you have such a connection to the piece. Great Job and kep writing from the heart.

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  3. I just got finished reading you music post and though that you did really well with this piece. I could see by what you wrote that you have a deep connection to what point you are trying to get acrossed. The only thing that I might say for next time would be to make a piece like this longer. When I was finished reading, I just wanted more. Overall though, I think that you did a really good job!

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